Santa give me gifts, give me cookies I'm hungry, I'll have milk with it, put the Christmas tree up now, I'll be a very good girl
-Hannah
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I loved the Tanka that Hannah wrote because it was really cute! I also liked it because i enjoyed things or writings that have to do with poetry. Anyways I really liked the poem that you wrote Hannah:)
Yea i liked that tanka too it was very nice and very cute.I liked it alot!I liked it because i enjoy writing and reading mmany poems.Poems are very nice things to write.I think that was a great one Hannah!(good job Hannah)
What i like about the poem is that it kinda sounds like a rythem and it is very sweetand nice .I think hannah had a excellent poem.Tanka poems are a very nice poems to write and it is very fun writing one.
I like poems because they are just so fun to write my favories are Acrostics and Tankas. just like the one Mrs. mcmaster posted. i like tankas because they are not too long or not to short.i like acrostics because they are about anything you want it to be about.What is your favorite type of poem?
Well like celene said my favorite are also tankas and acrostics because they are very nice poems to write.I like acrostics because it is cool how you can pick a topic and write a word for every letter.and i like tankas because they are just so fun and you make the topic anything you want it to be.I love writing poems!
My favorite poem is called "Sick" by shel Sliverstein. It is an amazing poem it is long but is amazing! I love that poem because it is really funny and instersting. People that read this they should read the peom because it is really funny and it is a great poem to read. I also love that poem because it is by Shel Sliverstein and he is my favorite author for kids! Also people that read this please get time to read the poem and some of Shel Sliverstein's books! Do you like Shel Sliverstein? If you do tell why you like him and if you don't like him tell why you don't like him.
Well what poems i like is actually a haiku.I like because it is about nature and you can write about anything you want it to be but it has to be nature.Plus its cool how its starts off 575 thats very cool.Another poem i like is an aucrostic because its what you want it to be and its awesome how you can write a word for every letter i also like many other differant poems but i think these are my favorite.Whats your favorite type of poem we wrote in mrs Mcmasters class?
I really liked the tinka Hannah. I liked how you were talking about christmas. I lastly like it because you were convicing santa to give you a present.
I cant wait untill winter break this saturday me and my family are going to canada to visit our cuzins its so fun because in winter when we go to canada we mostly play in the snow and we do snowball fights,snow angles,and even make snowmans.I love to visit my cuzins in canada and i cant wait to go see them!!!
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I loved the Tanka that Hannah wrote because it was really cute! I also liked it because i enjoyed things or writings that have to do with poetry. Anyways I really liked the poem that you wrote Hannah:)
Yea i liked that tanka too it was very nice and very cute.I liked it alot!I liked it because i enjoy writing and reading mmany poems.Poems are very nice things to write.I think that was a great one Hannah!(good job Hannah)
Good job HANNAH!!! That was a funny poem and it was cool. :D
Lol we just posted at the same time dana
i know right lol!
ha ha
whats up zeinab
lol we did it again!
School is the funnest
we learn many differant things
so much fun homework
lots and lots of fun projects
lets get lots of very good grades
thats a Tanka
I love the Tanka that Hannah wrote Tanka poem they are cool when you mix up the topics what is your favorite thing about the poem
What i like about the poem is that it kinda sounds like a rythem and it is very sweetand nice .I think hannah had a excellent poem.Tanka poems are a very nice poems to write and it is very fun writing one.
What do you like about poems?
I like poems because they are just so fun to write my favories are Acrostics and Tankas. just like the one Mrs. mcmaster posted. i like tankas because they are not too long or not to short.i like acrostics because they are about anything you want it to be about.What is your favorite type of poem?
Well like celene said my favorite are also tankas and acrostics because they are very nice poems to write.I like acrostics because it is cool how you can pick a topic and write a word for every letter.and i like tankas because they are just so fun and you make the topic anything you want it to be.I love writing poems!
What is your favorite poem and why?
My favorite poem is called "Sick" by shel Sliverstein. It is an amazing poem it is long but is amazing! I love that poem because it is really funny and instersting. People that read this they should read the peom because it is really funny and it is a great poem to read. I also love that poem because it is by Shel Sliverstein and he is my favorite author for kids! Also people that read this please get time to read the poem and some of Shel Sliverstein's books!
Do you like Shel Sliverstein? If you do tell why you like him and if you don't like him tell why you don't like him.
Yes, i do like him because he writes really good poems ive loved his poems since i was like 5! theey and he are and is sweet. what poems do u like
Well what poems i like is actually a haiku.I like because it is about nature and you can write about anything you want it to be but it has to be nature.Plus its cool how its starts off 575 thats very cool.Another poem i like is an aucrostic because its what you want it to be and its awesome how you can write a word for every letter i also like many other differant poems but i think these are my favorite.Whats your favorite type of poem we wrote in mrs Mcmasters class?
i dont know because last year i was in mrs.mcmasters class.
my favorite type of poem to write was a limerick because i like the rythym it has
I really liked the tinka Hannah. I liked how you were talking about christmas. I lastly like it because you were convicing santa to give you a present.
I cant wait untill winter break this saturday me and my family are going to canada to visit our cuzins its so fun because in winter when we go to canada we mostly play in the snow and we do snowball fights,snow angles,and even make snowmans.I love to visit my cuzins in canada and i cant wait to go see them!!!
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